Sorry if it sounds harsh, isn't meant that way, nice work many new people can profit from stuff like this and it will clean up the short questions thread.
I would explain LC1 better. Many people ask if you can cube only 1. And then many people cant find it, they go to Athula and get wrecked. Link a map maybe.
In the BCR quest the path for doing the trial of blood is not ideal, right next to ice is such a blink way and if you do the way in the map you provided why not lure them together in the middle without any blinks?
And for the trial of greed mention that you can farm the Trojan Jungle for Signets of gold super fast.
In the progression - instead of baalruns til lvl 65 I would suggest better spots for that, like hatred cows/extra areas in A5, K3BA, Trojan Jungle
>While running you have zero defense, walk speed is increased in Median.
Blocking is decreased by or to 1/3 too. The def is not just 0 it would be as if you were lvl 1 too. The whole get hit calculation is replaced by - get hit!
>Book of Summoning: now drops from The Summoner on Terror difficulty
Yeah it's black tome and D difficulty now.
>You can add sockets with the Act V quest reward, or by using the socket punch cube recipe. (the item plus 1-6 runes depending on how many sockets you need.
Only if the item has 0 sockets.
>The range of stats for armor is: 11-35%
And a defense value from like 1k to 1.5k. That can make a nice difference if you go for 300% ed.
>Shrine Crafting
Talk about ilvl. If you just want the shrine bonus and MO space do the rare ring+rare amulet + rare sacred item = Rare sacred item with ilvl 1.
You can make rare sacred items with the charsi quest. Which returns a white item as a rare item with ilvl = char level +4 on any difficulty.
>Jewel Crafting
A jewel found in dest can be crafted 6 times before the ilvl gets too low and should be replaced.
>Any non-sacred item + Oil of Enhancement + Arcane Crystal x2 → reroll item as unique
Mention that this is a good way to get unique rings not just all tiered uniques. Most people oversee that.
At the explanation about Zon I would remove the mention about defense. And at sin add the hokage guide.